A visual book review. The Goodreads review is after the cut.
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Excellent book which really helped me grasp how to get rid of a distant narration, and show vs tell the story. A quick read, with easy exercises each chapter end. The author’s own examples of her work comparing shallow vs deep Pov helped immensely, although a few made me wince with the body actions involved (a fisted heart that’s swallowed back down brought some gruesome visions).